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Emotionally Available's avatar

There’s something quietly dignified in the way you entered this journey not chasing the view, not resisting the delays, but allowing the experience to unfold as it wished. I felt the mist in your words, the weight of stillness, and the warmth of that tea.

Your theory of train travel, I suspect, goes far beyond geography it invites us to move without urgency, to notice without naming and to be reshaped by what we do not control. Thank you for reminding me that presence is a destination too.

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Thomas Beller's avatar

What a remarkable piece, not least because having encountered the phrase, ' father being carried by his son,' we then get the image itself. (" a young man carrying his father on his back," is the exact quote, make of my embellished version what you will.)

The ending is just amazing. I mean the fact of the train stopping.

I must say, the restrained mother and child... in that moment her feelings towards Dipendry Singha* might have been rather antagonistic. We don't know why she needed to catch that train so badly, after all.

*And the story of how you got the name? How you explained your asking for it? That is perhaps to come.

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